ACC 2 Confirmation 2

Here, for all the students who have not sent their discussion text then will resend yours in this addition day, please confirm your homework by commenting this site.

This addition time will be closed at 08.00 PM on Sunday 22, 10, 2012 
(no more addition time after this)

Please write "DONE" here.
thank you...

50 : 50

In fact, all of you have not done your homework (discussion text) in time. So, I will only collect the tenth students who have sent their comment, confirmation, and the text itself. For the others who have not done the homework (maybe you have difficulties in doing this) please give me your question by commenting this blog in Label ACC 2 Question.

For the student who will confirm your writing, please input your confirmation by commenting "ACC 2 Confirmation 2"  

Please follow the rule well because you’re final score that consist of:

 1. Cooperation (comments other’s blog)

  

       2. Creativity (posting/ good writing/ posting whether have asked before or not and designing

           your blog)

     

       3. Writing (the quality, originality, and creativity in choosing the topic)
        
       I always online to check your blog, so I need your cooperation too. 
       The last opportunity is on Sunday at 08.00 PM - Oct, 22, 2012
 
       Thank and keep fighting :)

ACC 2 Notice

Hello Guys...here I am waiting for your second task, it is about discussion text. In doing this, you have some rules that should be followed...

1. The format of your tittle should be ACC 2 (title)
    example: ACC 2 Jowo Style Effects

2. You should follow this blog as the requirement to be included in acceleration class students.

3. Please give your comment as your confirmation when you have posted your article.
   (The information was provided in Label : Notice Site - ACC 2 Confirmation )

If you have some question or difficulties in doing this, please give your response by commenting in Label : Share Site

Your deadline is on October 21st  2012 at 11.59 PM
Thank You...

Sweet Moments with Acceleration students

45 minutes with all the acceleration class students...

looks seriously but we makes fun moments here...

thanks for your cooperation so far, but it needs a little time to finish this research...i hope we can cooperate each other...keep move on guys!!!

ACC 2 Question

If some of you have difficulties in doing the homework (write a discussion text), you can ask me by comments this article.
Thank you...

ACC 2 Confirmation

Hello guys, I know you have started to write your own discussion text. Here you can confirm your writing by commenting this article.

Just write "DONE" in your comments.
Thank you...

Exercise

Please correct the text below!

11. Now, much[AH1]  people land clearing by burning the fores[AH2] , the step is very simple but turn out to be simples[AH3]  step make much[AH4]  save a variety of a problems [AH5] as contamination area,threaten forest ecosystems, and not healthy to peoples live are around the forest[AH6] .

22. To release the problemmany[AH7]  people give suggestion to have healty[AH8]  sleep. And the sugestions[AH9]  are [AH10] : arrange the sleep time, sleep in the right position, and eat nutrisious foods to increase the quality of our sleep.

33. Third, watching TV a lot is dangerous for our eyes. Too long-time eyes-contact could make it damaged. ………..[AH11] 

44. Finally, playing game can influence the psychology of the children. During its development times, children need proper tools to form their personality. For the example, through game online, they can learn to interact with others. They also can learn to compete, try to get what they want, try to accept their defeat, and feel satisfy because of their victory.  Children who like playing game will be more cheerful than the others who have never done it.[AH12] 

55. Obese people susceptible to disease[AH13] . Because they do not regularly eat the food they contain carbohydrates and fat in excess[AH14] . They rarely exercise [AH15] so that the accumulation of fat very quickly[AH16] . Diseases that can attack the hypertension, diabetes, stroke, heart attack, and others.[AH17] 

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